The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil of fuels should be the most important global priority today; to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is obvious many developing countries and several developed countries still use the fossil fuels and these resources are main resources for them. However, these countries are awarded of the several consequences of these resources for earth like global warming and damaging to protective ozone lyre, they do not pay more attention what they do and release lots of pollution by burning these fuels annually.
I absolutely agree that the investigation and development of safe alternatives is one of the utmost important global priority today that all the governments from around the world must pay attention to and they must adopt several laws to limit of using these resources and try to invest to new safe resources like water, wind and solar energy. It is clear that the consequences of using fossil fuels not only hazardous for people but they also threat the environment and earth. Although some developed countries already had explored some safe resources and now they are using them easily, it seems that they must issue their knowledge and their experience to the other countries as it is the global priority. More over, the other countries which have not this knowledge and technology try to gain useful information and invest on big projects that are considered new safe sources of energy and try to aware their societies about several irreversible damage that are happened if they want to continue using these fossil fuels by broadcasting several education programs on social media.
In conclusion, I would agree considering of safe alternatives is certainly the most important global priority these days which never would happened if the government do not want to union with together and cooperate with each other for this common purpose.
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Sentence: In conclusion, I would agree considering of safe alternatives is certainly the most important global priority these days which never would happened if the government do not want to union with together and cooperate with each other for this common purpose.
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