Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
In the last century that films are being an entertain and an experience of the daily life, as an adult and even as a young individual has it. Every person has the power to get the ideas what he or she learned after watching a movie. The question is whether to start with films showed about progressed being a country as a science or just an entertain for us in this life.
The first my argument is that if I am watching a film which is telling how a country was created, I can get awareness as a civilian of my country. Most of the citizen countries live in modern century which had media electronic facilities to get knowledge of the films by themselves, such as radio, television, and cinema. Start from cinema and television, an individual can receives information in each movie titles and contents in each programs which they broadcasted. For an example, people who do not recognize the background story of the established a country, this also can be helpful to realize in case unknowing their nation. It will not be a problem if people were knew more about their own country backgrounds.
Another strong reason to make clear this statement is that films contents are not only entertain, but the movies had pertain on the state will be create my patriotism to the country. For instance, a person who did not aware against nationality which is had a lot essential things and can I mention like independence declare, law, government, education, and culture contain in it. Again, it would be complicate circumstance through the next his daily life related quality as a good civilian.
In my conclusion, I am firmly of the view that films provides many advantages with important contents inside it. There is no doubt, if someone or maybe myself can get incredible experiences with watching a film which is showed how the ways a country was made and , surely it was including many great values to take from this subject.
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Sentence: Start from cinema and television, an individual can receives information in each movie titles and contents in each programs which they broadcasted.
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Sentence: For an example, people who do not recognize the background story of the established a country, this also can be helpful to realize in case unknowing their nation.
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Sentence: Another strong reason to make clear this statement is that films contents are not only entertain, but the movies had pertain on the state will be create my patriotism to the country.
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Sentence: In my conclusion, I am firmly of the view that films provides many advantages with important contents inside it.
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