Food can be produced cheaper if we use improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some of methods may be dangerous for human health and have negative effect for local communities. What is your opinion?
Food is one part of human life. Some people think produced food using machinery is better and improved fertilizers. However, it could be dangerous for human life and have negative effects for local communities. Below I will explain my opinion.
Nowadays, some people produce the food by using machine. They think produced food by machine could be easier and faster. Beside of that, price of food could be cheaper. Numerous societies agree with this method because modern machine could produce a lot of food in one day. As people know, produced food by machine could change taste of food become various kind, chili sauce, grill corn, and chicken sauce. Most of societies like the food with various flavors. According to manager of company food said, their company could obtain more benefit and their product could produce a lot than using traditional machine. Company of food could improve their financial and could make some of new varieties of food. Therefore, produced food using machine is better and improve fertilizers.
Nevertheless, produced food using machine could have negative effects for human body and life in the future. As societies know, even though, price of food become cheaper, it could not give guarantee that food have healthy ingredients. Probably, some of company mixes their food with dangerous ingredients and without quantity. That food could confer negative effects for human body, for instance, societies could obtain cancer, cough, and stomachache. Most dangerous disease is cancer because in food which produce by machine could mix with chemical ingredients. Chemical ingredients are not fine for food but some company use it for keeping fresh their product. Company of food is never control to produce their product by machine and they never think the effect for human health. According to doctor of food, produced food from machine is not suit to consume for human. Therefore, doctor of food give advice to consume the food, which make by traditional machine.
In summary, it seems produced food by machine could offer negative effect for human health and or local communities. People should be smarter to consume food and control their food make by machine.
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Sentence: In summary, it seems produced food by machine could offer negative effect for human health and or local communities.
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Sentence: People should be smarter to consume food and control their food make by machine.
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