A friend who is living overseas should visit you soon and would love to stay at your place. Write a letter and explain
- Why cannot he/she stay at your place this time?
- Suggest an alternative arrangement.
- Invite him/her to stay in the future.
Dear Sarah,
I am very sorry to inform you unfortunately you cannot stay at my place in your next trip.
In last few days, I have some problems with sewer system in my place. I have got a repair man, and he tool met he should replace old system with new one, so I have to move on for once month. I am going to stay with my sister during this time.
I know you remember my sister Peni, my sister and I be glad if you stay at her place this time. You know she has a big apartment and you will be comfortable in her place as mine. She lives alone and be glad if you accept her invitation.
I am going to invite you for stay at my place in next summer when you will come for summer holiday. Once again I apologize I cannot be your hostage. I wish have a good trip. Please call me when you arrive.
With love,
Mari.
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so I have to move on for once month.
so I have to move on for one month.
he tool met he should
he told me he should
Sentence: I wish have a good trip.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to wish and have
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.636 21.0 (need more compound or complex sentences)
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 161 200
No. of Characters: 601 1000
No. of Different Words: 87 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.562 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.733 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.984 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 27 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 10 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 7 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 5 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.456 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.464 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.66 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.295 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4