The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to reduce violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Nowadays, Television producers have rendered TV shows and movies inundated with violent and pornographic episodes, which is for the purpose of making profits. Some people argue that these programs should be banned from being shown in general public, while others oppose this perspective on the grounds that they just boost the development of entertainment industries. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.
The convincing arguments can be made that violent contents brings numerous adverse effects on children’s growth and raises crime rate substantially. To start with, children, less...
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