The graph below shows cinema attendance by age in Great Britain.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The depicted chart provides statistical information about the proportion of various age groups who went to cinemas in Great Britain for 16 years. It is apparent that across the indicated period the great number of people preferring going to cinemas belonged to 15-24 age groups while people who were 35 and over were not more likely to attend cinemas.
Referring to the graph, in 1984 younger people between the age of 15-24, which accounted for 19 %, ranked that first and was twice as much as much as the number of people who were 7-14 aged. In 2000, despite some fluctuations both figures soared...
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Sentence: According to the chart it can be also revealed that people who were 25-35 years old, showed the similar pattern, to be more precise, although between 1994 and 1990 there were noticeably fluctuations the overall percentage skyrocketed by 25 and collided with the line indicating the attendance of 7-14 aged people.
Description: The fragment were noticeably fluctuations is rare
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