The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in the European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The given graph reveals information about four mean of transportation (train, car, tube and bus)were used by the commuters in European city given the period of 40 years.
It can be clearly seen that, overall, in 1960, bus was greatest mode of transportation where as car was highest in 2000. In 1960, bus was top of the table with highest 38 percent of commuters and that was two time more than train used. Adding to it,Tube and car were accounted for about 28 and 23 percent respectively. In 1980, both train and bus was equal traveled by the commuters at around 28 percent and 23 percent of traveler equal used car and tube modes.
The vertical graph depicts in 2000, car was used by maximum about 37 percent commuters where as tube and train were occupied second and third position with 25 and around 21 percent respectively.
It is, therefor, in 1960, the trend bus transportation was maximum and people were commute highest with private vehicle in 2000. Thus, the lifestyle of European's people was changed over the given period.
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Sentence: In 1980, both train and bus was equal traveled by the commuters at around 28 percent and 23 percent of traveler equal used car and tube modes.
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Sentence: It is, therefor, in 1960, the trend bus transportation was maximum and people were commute highest with private vehicle in 2000.
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