How important to able to speaking well. And do you agree or disagree that presentation skills should be taught to children at schools?
Communication skills have become more important in the modern world's difficult life. In fact, some people hold the view that young people should learn them in educational places. I completely agree this debate and will explain the reasons behind my decision.
First of all, children who can effectively describe their feelings and thoughts can build strong relationships with their peers and avoid misunderstanding. This enables them to improve their social and interpersonal skills which would be highly beneficial in their professional and personal life. For example, even if people have a vast amount of knowledge in their business, they are not able to promote to management position without good presentation skills.
Every student learn technical skills such as maths and science at schools, however speech training can teach them important soft skills such as leadership, creativity, persuasiveness and organization. In addition, children will learn how to use their body language to communicate effectively such as eye contact, facial expression, posture and gesture. As a result, it is obvious that they can easily communicate with their teachers, parents or friends rather than being shy and sitting alone.
Lastly, it can be commonly agreed that most people acquire new skills easier in their younger years. Therefore, they should be taught in educational institutions; otherwise it would be very difficult to gain these skills in the future.
In conclusion, there are significant benefits of teaching speaking and presentation skills to children for their professional and social life. Therefore, I believe that acquiring these skills should be taught at schools.
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