The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life
Earning money for better living conditions is one of the main purposes of each people, so that they all find out different ways for it. For example, some people try to do it with the help of multiplying the number of sources of his income, to be more precise to have several careers. But it should be noted that, the main reason of having different careers is not only to increase the profit, also it is the demand of the modern world.
As we noted above, nowadays having a single career has became an old fashioned one. People who claim it, also say that the new fashion will be having several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. In my opinion, this view is justifying itself, and I can support it with some facts.
Firstly, we live in technology century, so it is easier to get information, gain qualifications and improve ourselves, not only in our profession also in different spheres. For example, if we want we can even take online courses because now it is not impossible.
On the other hand, the second career means more money which will help us to support ourselves or our family. We know that sometimes it is not possible to get everything we want with our income and may be another career can solve this difficulty.
Finally, I want to sum up my ideas and say that it is better if we will follow the requirements of modern world.
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