In nowadays society and in a globalized world, it is very common to study or work abroad. The countries seems to be very close as if there is no physical barriers between them and people goes from a country to another easily, earning news experience for professional and personal life during a period of time. However, as everything in life, there is some advantages and disadvantages on living abroad.
First of all, almost everybody have wanted to live in a different place a day in life. Meet new people and learn about other culture and customs are two of the main purpose chosen by those who w...
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should be `first` not
should be `first` not `firsts`
should be `used to do in their own country` not `used to do in they own country`
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Sentence: But I believe that the firsts months are difficult because you have to become adapted to the other culture, the way of life of people and also the way they work or study.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to firsts and months
Sentence: Everything may be very different for what the person is used to do in they own country.
Description: The token in is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to in and they
Sentence: To sum up briefly, i believe that despite of the advantages of feeling alone and not get used to other culture in the firsts months, the vantages of living abroad are bigger, mainly because you grow as a person.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to firsts and months
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 325 350
No. of Characters: 1463 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.246 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.502 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.592 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.884 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.626 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5