If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study what would you choose Explain your choice using specific reasons and details

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If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

If I would have the opportunity to study a subject. I would eagerly choose Automobile Engineering. This subject was of great interest to me during my schooling. Although I am qualified with bachelor degrees in computing and I like working in this field, Automobile Engineering is a dream and passion of mine

To my way of thinking, Automobile Engineering has a great scope, competitive market for its new designs and models, which reminds me of my younger days, when I was drawing the skeleton of my dream sports car. Since my family's financial conditions were weak, I was forced t...

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Sentence: However, my circumstances changed, but my vision or goal to realise my dream is still burning in my heart.
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