The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the last 30 years, internet is the great creation of modern technology. Most of people change their behavior to use internet because it has more benefits for their life. Here in Indonesia, the inhabitants have used internet since they find its advantages. Obviously, it helps them so much and gives the website’s provider as well. However, it might cause some disadvantages for human life. This essay will examine the people’s opinion related to the using of internet in this era.
Some inhabitants disagree with the using of internet because of some its disadvantages. Firstly, it might increase criminal activity to steal people’s money. In the internet, the users are easier to do anything include crimes. As a result, they are easily it influenced by some beautiful word in the internet. Without awareness, people could be interest in the criminal contents. Secondly, the high number of websites in the internet makes the users difficult to search good information. Lots of information makes people confuse to choose the information that they want. For example, when you search a topic in Google, you will get more than 1,000 topics about it.
On the other hand, other citizens believe that internet has helped them in many ways of life. First of all, the internet is starting to replace other forms of entertainment. In the past, television was the main media for entertainment. Then, people search the easier way to get entertainment. Nowadays, many television programs are showing in the internet. This helps many people to get information everywhere. In fact, the buyers of portable computer are more than television. What is more, internet gives us instant access to get information on almost any subject. It becomes instant access because it uses satellite connection device which has more speed than the technology before. Also, internet serves many sites which contain news in all subjects. One of the examples is the online studying system which student could receive the lessons from the teacher without meeting.
Furthermore, internet is one of the efficient technologies in this world which could help everything what the users want. The users could get information for their business easily in the internet. Incidentally, they might get information about the wrong things that may give them problems. It seems like what had happened today, many crimes happen in the internet.
To put them in a nutshell, internet might bring many benefits to the users. However, the wrong way of using internet will cause big problems. As a good user, people should filter the contents which have positive effects for them.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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2013-11-22 | affan baskra | 55 | view |
2013-11-01 | BeurejangnaDena | 75 | view |
2013-10-31 | Rita Irianti | 60 | view |
2013-10-31 | fikri | 77 | view |
2013-10-21 | musrah | 73 | view |
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