It is believed that young people have too much freedom and they do not pay much attention to the older people’s advice. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
Nowadays, human life is changed more than, as psychologist’s expect especially in manner area. In the past old people had an especial position in their family and society. However, we see rarely this matter happen in society.
In my opinion, our generation become rude more than every era. To beginning, there are so many reason for this attitude. Firstly, generation gap is a factor we should pay attention to it. Today, young generation think their parents think and live in tradition way. They do not want update their manner and want everything does like past. For example, I know an old ...
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there are so many reason for this attitude.
there are so many reasons for this attitude.
young generation think their parents think and live in tradition way.
young generations think that their parents think and live in a traditional way.
Sentence: For example, I know an old man that he think his children do not go to travel alone, but his children like go every place without their parents.
Description: The fragment he think his is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace think with verb, past tense
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to like and go
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.561 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 328 350
No. of Characters: 1533 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.256 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.674 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.432 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.561 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.279 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.48 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5