It is generally accepted that families are not as close they used to be.Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought close together include any relevant example from your experience.
Relations are very important in life and without them we cannot survive in society. It is a general assumption that families are not as close they used to be.
First of all, let me discuss a time element, which is almost become rear in our life and without proper time management it is quiet difficult to maintain family relations. People nowadays do not use their time with a proper management.Numerous activities are also become our problem because everyone is trying to maximize earning and get involved in either advance studies (for career enhancement), or part time work. Another factor is need to rationalize, which was not a part of life in past and It is different type of activities in youngsters particularly.For example Social media, computer gaming and smart phone usage.In deed youngsters are much busy in these activities and this is really impacting on family relations.
First-rate family relations are truly important for us, however people should ought to make make their calender while proper time management keep in mind. Because this is only a way they can manage their time smartly. Priority is also a significant reason, which is being directly affected, For example if a person set his task priority, then he can manage his time efficiently for his family. Therefore time management and scheduling are only a ways that can used to build strong family relations and people can find their empty time and once they found their empty time they can share this time with their family and relatives as well.
Concluding this, I believe that everyone has the same time, which people had in past i.e 24 hours/day. Essential thing is to understand family relations and make them strong, as this is very prominent feature of any society.
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only a ways that can used to build
only a ways that can be used to build
this is very prominent feature of any society.
this is a very prominent feature of any society.
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