In many countries, more and more young people are unable to find jobs after graduation. Problems and solutions.
In modern society, a majority of graduates are unemployeed, so they hold the opinion that graduation stands for unemployment. The high rate of unemplyment is a heavy strick for our society and solving the problem is also a severe challange. Off many factors that contribute to youth unemployment, i believe that graduates' high unrealistic expectation and lack of skills for company position are the main reason.
Initially, there is no denying that chinese economic development developa dramatically, as a consequence, more chances of getting an ideal job are possible,while, because of a ...
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Sentence: In modern society, a majority of graduates are unemployeed, so they hold the opinion that graduation stands for unemployment.
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Sentence: The high rate of unemplyment is a heavy strick for our society and solving the problem is also a severe challange.
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Sentence: Off many factors that contribute to youth unemployment, i believe that graduates' high unrealistic expectation and lack of skills for company position are the main reason.
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Sentence: Initially, there is no denying that chinese economic development developa dramatically, as a consequence, more chances of getting an ideal job are possible,while, because of a large number of population in china,tackling this problem is a long-term run.
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Sentence: However, graduaters have a high expectation for their original job, which discourage them to work at certain jobs, thus, enterprises fail to accept any employees.
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Sentence: Accompanying increasingly high educational backgrounds graduates and less working experience of graduaters, it is unrealistic to acquire high salary.
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Suggestion: Refer to backgrounds and graduates
Sentence: On the other hand, graduaters' skills for complishing a job is lackness.
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Sentence: In other words, school education lies on the theoristic studying, in contrary, an experienced employee is their favourate.
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Sentence: Different developing goals lead to an unbalance batween education system and conpanies.
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Sentence: Therefore, the fight between an experienced staff and a high degree gruduater comes to the end with result that the winner is the former.
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Sentence: Inevitanelly, solving youth unemployment problem should be at the top of government's agenda and policies associating with different reasons can be pursued immediately.
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Sentence: Specifically, first: to deal with this problem ,the key is to control the sharp increasingly population.
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Sentence: Second: propelling educational reformation and pursuing policies to get students into companies to practice.
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Sentence: Third: it is essential for graduates to choose a suitable jod, but not a high paid posotion.
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Sentence: Overall, more dfforts should be coordinated from government ,society and individuals to adress this severe problem.
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Sentence: It is a long-term social scourage, though, we have reason to believe that government has the capable of problem-solving.
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Sentence: In modern society, a majority of graduates are unemployeed, so they hold the opinion that graduation stands for unemployment.
Error: unemployeed Suggestion: unemployed
Sentence: The high rate of unemplyment is a heavy strick for our society and solving the problem is also a severe challange.
Error: unemplyment Suggestion: unemployment
Error: strick Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: challange Suggestion: challenge
Sentence: Off many factors that contribute to youth unemployment, i believe that graduates' high unrealistic expectation and lack of skills for company position are the main reason.
No spelling errors
Sentence: Initially, there is no denying that chinese economic development developa dramatically, as a consequence, more chances of getting an ideal job are possible,while, because of a large number of population in china,tackling this problem is a long-term run.
Error: long-term Suggestion: longer
Error: tackling Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: developa Suggestion: develop
Sentence: However, graduaters have a high expectation for their original job, which discourage them to work at certain jobs, thus, enterprises fail to accept any employees.
Error: graduaters Suggestion: graduates
Sentence: Accompanying increasingly high educational backgrounds graduates and less working experience of graduaters, it is unrealistic to acquire high salary.
Error: graduaters Suggestion: graduates
Sentence: On the other hand, graduaters' skills for complishing a job is lackness.
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Error: graduaters Suggestion: graduates
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Sentence: In other words, school education lies on the theoristic studying, in contrary, an experienced employee is their favourate.
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Sentence: Different developing goals lead to an unbalance batween education system and conpanies.
Error: conpanies Suggestion: companies
Error: batween Suggestion: between
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Sentence: Therefore, the fight between an experienced staff and a high degree gruduater comes to the end with result that the winner is the former.
Error: gruduater Suggestion: graduate
Sentence: Inevitanelly, solving youth unemployment problem should be at the top of government's agenda and policies associating with different reasons can be pursued immediately.
No spelling errors
Sentence: Specifically, first: to deal with this problem ,the key is to control the sharp increasingly population.
No spelling errors
Sentence: Second: propelling educational reformation and pursuing policies to get students into companies to practice.
No spelling errors
Sentence: Third: it is essential for graduates to choose a suitable jod, but not a high paid posotion.
Error: jod Suggestion: joy
Error: posotion Suggestion: position
Sentence: Overall, more dfforts should be coordinated from government ,society and individuals to adress this severe problem.
Error: adress Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: dfforts Suggestion: efforts
Sentence: It is a long-term social scourage, though, we have reason to believe that government has the capable of problem-solving.
Error: long-term Suggestion: longer
Error: problem-solving Suggestion: problem solving
Error: scourage Suggestion: No alternate word
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