In many countries recently young single people have been living far form their parents, from the time they began studies or work and until the married, Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to this trend?
It is true that more and more young individuals who are not married yet no longer live with their families for significant reasons. Some for educational purposes while for others is for employment. I tend to believe that this development has more positive effects.
This trend affects young single persons positively by immensely increasing their self-reliance. As a result this could probably boosts self-confidence, hence, making persons more independent. In line with this, a sense of competence develops along with their growth process which might lead them to become ultra competitive on thei...
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