Many people believe that, women make better parent than men and is why they have a greater role in rising up children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women in parenting. What is your opinion?
Child is born from two parents-a man and a woman. Both sexes play a crucial role in rising up the child. Although, father can become excellent parent, mothers are in reality, better parent based on her natural intuition and compassionate tendencies.
On the one hand, men are often strict and wider outlook on life. His role is very important to lead his children to become good adults. In addition, children need a guide who helps them to learn right from the wrong and to teach them to make good choices. Because of men’s mental specifications, he can allow his child more freedom and understa...
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