Many university students live with their families while others need to live to live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations?
University students are no longer children or mature adults. These young adults sometimes decided to stay in hostel for university studies, while others continue to stay with their parents. There are pros and cons in both of these conditions.
To begin with, staying with family during higher studies gives more flexibility for students in their daily activities. For instance, one can eat, sleep and play at any time he desires. The warmth of protection of his family members helps him to face problems and the assistance of well experienced family members is a blessing for them to overcome it ef...
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