Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not in others. Some people therefore think that government should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society; those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?
It is controversial issue that whether government should pay university fees for certain subjects that are needed by society or not. It is obvious that this strategy has several advantages and disadvantages which government should investigate their consequences in the long run time.
On the one hand, when universities support students who study certain fields that are important for society, provide them with golden opportunity to get a good job as soon as they are graduated since their society needs their skills and experts which would never happen if they studied irrelevant subjects. More o...
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Dear editor if i want to
Dear editor
if i want to write this essay for real ielts exam, what is my real mark?
The real mark is around 6.5
The real mark is around 6.5 out of 9.
Our mark is very close to the real mark.
You will need to remove the flaws we listed for you in order to get a higher mark.
Hi there, In this essay, is
Hi there,
In this essay, is it mandatory to write/explain the importance of "specialized in certain fields". Like - how specialized occupation benefits to society and not other.....
Will my essay be lack of "Task Completion", if i will not discuss above topic?
I have recently written this essay in my class exam,which I will be uploading shortly. However, i cam to know that i lost band due to lack of Task in-completion.
I really need a help to approach this essay.
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flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 34.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.786 7.5
again you don't use 'not only...but also' properly.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 410 350
No. of Characters: 2130 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.5 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.195 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.813 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 34.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.786 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.665 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5