More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is positive or negative?
In this era, developed technology is more better then before. It can help people to work in this world. Many people can do everything with technology well. However, it has negative and positive impacts for society. Below, I will explain it.
Recently, many people are working at their jobs. Some of them always use computer to help their works. Computer is one of developed technology, and many people always play it such business man or woman, children, and the other. Computer is very important , and every day many people always use it, but it can make them self unhealthy because it can disturb your eyes, and people become stupid.
And the second reason of negative impact are sociality. Sociality is one of necessary for life if their want have a good relationship. Technology can make some people closed with their neighbor because they west their time at home with computer and every day just stay at home. So, it makes they feel alone without friends or something like that.
On the other hand, developed technology has a positive impact for many people in the other country. The positive impact is they not feel tired because they can get many information’s and more practice and efficient to search something. With developed technology, they can improve their knowledge, update, and so on.
To sum up, developed technology can give negative impacts for society if they use it every day. However, it also give positive impact because more practice and efficient to find something.
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Sentence: Technology can make some people closed with their neighbor because they west their time at home with computer and every day just stay at home.
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