Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food?
Over time, there are plenty of economically foods have popular in everywhere especially local markets, because most of people nowadays do not consume a home prepared food. As a result, society is keen on instant meal in daily life.
A peak job time turns someone to an extremely instant lifestyle every day. Even though everyone knows some advantages of a healthy meal, but people prefer to choose fast food which can buy from everywhere they go. Also without worrying some effects which might happen from meal, people think the lowest price is also one of the interesting part that should be consi...
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Sentence: Over time, there are plenty of economically foods have popular in everywhere especially local markets, because most of people nowadays do not consume a home prepared food.
Description: The fragment of economically foods is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace economically with adjective
Description: The fragment have popular in is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace popular with adverb
should be consider for choosing a meal.
should be considered for choosing a meal.
fast food which can buy...
fast food which can be bought...
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Words: 259 350
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 259 350
No. of Characters: 1216 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.012 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.695 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.262 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.245 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.343 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.623 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5