As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Some people live to work, and others work to live. In fact, job satisfaction depends on the job have and the conditions under which they are employed. In this essay, I will explore some main contributing factors that make a job worthwhile and how it is realistic to all employees.
The prime element leads to job satisfaction, of course, is money. In fact, virtually all workers consider salaries or wages as a first priority to find a job or evaluate how good someone's job is. However, this is not all. Another main factor could be promotion. To specify, employees often long for opportunities to...
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Sentence: In fact, job satisfaction depends on the job have and the conditions under which they are employed.
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Sentence: To benefit from jobs, there is no need to find a job including all contributing factors like above, but let them find a job which suitable for their purpose.
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