"Mothers play key roles in the upbringing of children. But in the recent times both parents are getting busy with professional life. Who in your opinion should take the responsibility of child care now?" Give your opinion in no less than 250 words.
There is no doubt that mothers play a paramount role to raise the child, but due to the fact that both parents are working, children need same care and affection form alternatives ways. In my opinion, such responsibility should start form parents especially mother to grandparents and kinder garden schools.
Firstly, mother should devote time to up bring the child as this will ramp up the family bonds. At least for first two years of little one, she should have maternity leave so as to show her affection and devotion to the infact. Alternatively, mother can work part time hours owing to the f...
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Sentence: There is no doubt that mothers play a paramount role to raise the child, but due to the fact that both parents are working, children need same care and affection form alternatives ways.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to alternatives and ways
Sentence: At least for first two years of little one, she should have maternity leave so as to show her affection and devotion to the infact.
Error: infact Suggestion: infant
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 382 350
No. of Characters: 1884 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.421 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.932 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.542 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 130 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.471 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.714 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.882 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.57 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5