Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some settlers in the world have different statements about animal experiments. The first viewers believe that it is to improve health sector for human body and results of production. However, the second talkers think with turnaround of vantage point from this case. Although, there are unequal judgments, I personally dwell on that it is better if builders restrict this experiment and take responsibility against the negative impacts.
On the left hands, semi humans justify animal experiments with some reasons to support their arguments. Firstly, grade of disease and virus injection rises followed by time. Medical center efforts to make human lives still alive although he must sacrifice animals to clear human’s problem, said critical thinkers, “Sometimes, a purpose commands to allow an immolation to reach better intent”. Afterwards, development of scientist encourages forming hospital experiments, especially not obsolete. Throughout these experiments, it will increase level of knowledge for people who can study or develop further so that education by experiment will not slake. Summing up, discoverers want to help human’s difficulty and evolve tutoring discipline.
On the right site, there are animal oppression by animal experiments. Investigators of improving method in healthy area usually perform the practice of animal experimentation in laboratory by using mice to search the way and to find new medicines which will solve human’s sick. It is mice which are injured by researcher’s project that they will be extinct. Besides, animal treatment in finding process of drugs shows brutality for animal beings. It indicates ill-fated for animal life due to researcher’s project without thinking animal condition, pity. Duly, all animals are protected by humans because they are also natural creature which has the right to fair trial in the globe and life freely. On the whole, scientists should discover the other possibility methods of animal exploration.
In last line, it seems to me that there are some ideas about this project which should not be stopped, but discoverers should limit and re breed project specimen.
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