Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way of people live?
Due to tight schedule of work, recent years many people primarily living in industrial city want to spend their time effectively. For this reason, eating considered time-consuming activity should be simpler. Therefore, consuming fast food becomes an option which is preferred by people. Although instant food brings advantage, at the same time it should be noted that it is probably not good for body health as well as worsens people’s habit.
Apropos to the food science, some additional chemical compounds which is frequently added to the food are detected and scientifically proven as insalubr...
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