Nowadays, many people go shopping in their free time. Shopping has replaced many other activities that people choose as their hobby. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
As a human every of us has some hobby in our entire life. Some of these hobbies are very strange while some of them are very common. People usually do their hobby in their free time such as collect stamp or read a book and so on. Today, we see some activities like go shopping or window shopping, eating become people's hobby.
From my point of view the most obvious reason of this phenomenon is they way of people's life is change a lot during these years. I mean in the past people just bought goods when they needed them. They never bought useless thing just because of fun. However, people in ...
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From my point of view the most obvious reason of this phenomenon is they way of people's life is change a lot during these years.
From my point of view the most obvious reason of this phenomenon is that the way of people's life has changed a lot during these years.
people in current time become more consumer than past.
people in current time become more consumer than people in the past.
shopping is take a lot of time,
shopping is taken a lot of time,
Sentence: Besides, shopping is take a lot of time, in rush world that we live every minute is important. consequently, you do not have enough time to do other useful acitivties like go to gym, or go to movie or even spend time with your friends and familiy.
Error: familiy Suggestion: family
Error: acitivties Suggestion: activities
Sentence: I thinkwe should create a blanace between all our hobbies, so we can do all of them.
Error: thinkwe Suggestion: think
Error: blanace Suggestion: balance
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