Nowadays,the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
Relationship between people is one of the significant parts of our life. Certainly, today technologies have a huge influence on the style of life generally and on interacting people on society especially. I strongly agree that development of new technology has a positive impact. Firstly, this is due to the fact that people have an opportunity to be in touch with relatives and friends no matter where you are and secondly, progress in technology’s world helps us in business and study.
Without any doubts, nowadays new services and devices help keep in touch with family and friends. The...
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make Has this become a positive or negative development 82
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