Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development ?
People’s life has totally changed owing to technology. In past, when there was no technology people’s life was simple. Technology effects people’s life in both negative and positive way. No doubt that it affects the relationships among people in more than one way.
Technology give people comfortable as well as easy life style. In the matter of relationships, in past, people went to each others home for different purposes. It make a social relationship among people. Secondly, there were no means of transport in past. So, it was wastage of time and energy. In addition, when people went t...
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Sentence: Technology give people comfortable as well as easy life style.
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Sentence: In the matter of relationships, in past, people went to each others home for different purposes.
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Sentence: It make a social relationship among people.
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Sentence: But technology help them to make their relations better.
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Sentence: To put the matter in proper light, modern conditions wants more time for personal life.
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Sentence: Relations make like past are very difficult these days because of busyness and fast life.
Error: busyness Suggestion: business
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