People in modern societies are increasingly finding themselves under greater pressure and having less leisure time. What do you think are the reasons for this?
With the fast pace of life in modern society, many people complain that they have less time to entertain themselves and it is difficult to free themselves from tremendous pressure. What factors lead to this unpleasant phenomenon and what we can do to solve this problem have become a concern.
Economists claim that fierce competition makes people have to work hard to survive, otherwise we will probably be thrown out of the game and become losers. This kind of competition has begun since we were very young when we were sent to the the prestigious schools to pursue a better education so that we...
- Some people claim that widespread advertising in the modern society has a harmful effect on young people. Therefore, advertisements should be strictly limited on TV, radio, the Internet and in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree with th 80
- Modern educational institutions do not offer all the ingredients that are needed for success. To what extent do you agree with the above statement? 83
- [City Planning]In urban areas, some people prefer to live alone or live in a small family , rather than big extended family.Is this a positive or negative trend? 83
- Education Some people argue that the government should support funding for the arts while some other people suggest that the money should be used for public health and education Discuss both views and give your opinion 90
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 75
Sentence: This kind of competition has begun since we were very young when we were sent to the the prestigious schools to pursue a better education so that we could gain an edge over our competitors for a more comfortable job with palatable income.
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