A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent times, individual's worth seems not be the same as in the past. Honor, kindness and trust but also love, friendship and honest are values that apparently belong to other times and the only important things to show and demonstrate to others would be social status and material possessions and this is sadly found in modern society at all stages. I believe we all should reconsider this trend and focus on what is very important in life, to be and not to appear.
Nowadays the most important things to achieve in people's lives seem to be success, money, power and luxury goods such as cars...
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