The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparison where relevant.
The pie chart shows that there are four main causes of degradation of land all around the world while the table shows effect of land degraded by those causes in three different regions in the 1990s.
According to the pie chart, the major cause of land degradation is over-grazing activity with the highest percentage among all four. Deforestation owns 30% while over-cultivation activity owns 28% of the chart respectively. Another 7% of land degradation is caused by other affects.
However, these main causes had affected three region in the world. During 1990s, Europe was the region with the...
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