The plans below show Zhabei high school in 1990 and 2010. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
Given are the two plans of a high school property in 1990 and 2010. Based on the infrastructure of the school view in 2010 compared to 1990, there are various changes in the alignment of the buildings.
Referring to the map in 1990, the environment is much more isolated and fewer buildings compared to 2010. The most highlighted change in 2010 is the introduction of landscaping around the premises and creating an environment friendly zone. In addition, the school property is divided into 2 sections; to the left is the campus and to the right are the apartments together with shops. However, th...
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