Public celebrations (national days, festivals) are held in many countries. Some people say that these celebrations are a waste of money and we should spend money on more important things. Do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons and examples according to your knowledge and experience.
Celebrating festivals are causes of actions which dedicate happiness from ancient days. Different societies has been celebrates their pleasurable moments in different ways. Celebration is a combine consequence of admiring’s, memorizing’s, and happiness with traditions, cultures and new trends. Therefore, celebrating festival can be agreeable but, unreasonable way of spending money on celebrations can’t be accepted.
First of all, I will explain about the importance of celebrating festivals. Occasions are involves in people happiest events, that places where families, friend’s and rel...
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Sentence: Different societies celebrates their pleasurable moments in different ways.
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Sentence: There is a growing trend of celebrating festivals in extraordinarily, that those people who waiting to have a chance of show off their richness and self respectfulness.
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Sentence: I believe this scenario would permits to encourage the demerits of celebrations to the people who don't understand the major impact of celebrating festivals.
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