The rate of population is increasingly growing in most countries of the world and causes a number of major problems especially in poor countries
Describe some of that over population causes and suggest at least one possible solution.
The population of the whole world is increasing regularly each year. There are many different NGOs which try to help poor countries and people to have a better life. It’s a fact that people and governments are getting more and more worried about population.
There are many problems which is caused by over population ,such as lack of job vacancies which resulted in depressed and angry people who can not afford their expenses and have no hope about the future. Another point is these days men die from starvation, in poor countries people can not afford for food, in fact, most of the time there is no food for them therefore, they become seriously ill. There are many children in Africa or other underdeveloped countries who suffer from this kind of sickness.
Although governments have been discussing this problem for many years, there are no definite rules or consequences for that. One might be the advantages which can be given to small families or the support which can be done only for the first child of each family about education. Another solution is to teach adults that how to prevent from pregnancy.
To sum up, it’s obvious that we should all help to save our planet and help everyone who are already in this world live and not just be alive. Teaching and being worried about this huge problem might be useful. If a lot of people think about that, they would help to increase the standards of living in poor countries.
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