With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of
the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Technology evolution changed not only the devices we use to get information, but also the sources we use to consider. The internet, for instance, is influencing the way we approach news, passing from daily newspapers to last minute web news. In my opinion, newspapers will be soon replaced by several forms of digital information.
First of all, the internet allows people to keep updated about particular events or general news. This is something unthinkable just reading newspapers, because the latter are published just once per day. Therefore, if someone desires to follow a particular situatio...
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Thanks, I'm trying to improve
Thanks, I'm trying to improve in this way.
I'll do my best, tomorrow, at the test.
Thank you again, for your very useful advice.
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No. of Words: 265 350
Sentence Length SD: 4.838 7.5 (you always have this issue)
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Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 265 350
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No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.035 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.925 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.803 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.083 21.0
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.099 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5