Safety standars are important when building people’s homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes the government or the people who build the homes.
Concept of beautiful building is the most important thing for people. However, either governments or people should be pay attention regarding safety standards of building.
As the governments, it is a duty to make strict regulations concerning people homes or storey in order to produce safety standards building. Legal form in this case such as statue, licence, and other governments ordinance. However, the law makers should be regularly monitoring or supervising the regulation in societies. Because if the regulation makers are not taking care about the regulation, it seems the regulations not...
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 276 350
No. of Characters: 1463 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.076 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.301 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.894 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.19 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.309 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5