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saving money is a good habit for an individual after the retirement for an individual ater retirement .do you agree or disagree?
A penny saved is a penny earned.No doubt, saving money is a preferable habit for a person in today's cut throat competition globe. It is pondered that it is desirable habit for an individual after the retirement . I fully disagree with this statement .below i will accord the reasons with this statement.
Firstly,one's whole life is spent in making money in inflation world.At the age when an individual reached to retirement,money is not for keeping in their pockets but it should be spent for theri flee lives.Half of their lives they are busy in making more currency notes .AFTer retirement , ...
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Sentence: AFTer retirement, senior citizens get more vistas in buying kitchen utensils, furniture, transport vehicles etc. To explain it further, an army job retiree get more discounts in buying vehicles than normal individual.
Description: The fragment retiree get more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace get with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: Thus, those who made them to leave in others houses, why they should get that saving money ?
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and houses
Sentence: At the age when an individual reached to retirement, money is not for keeping in their pockets but it should be spent for theri flee lives.
Error: theri Suggestion: their
Sentence: So, at this age for hom they are saving the money ?If seniors save their money the whole money after their death will be given to their children.
Error: hom Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: It is undeliably, that after the retirement their age can be defined as the last phase of the life wheel.
Error: undeliably Suggestion: undeniably
Sentence: Thus, they should enjoy these precious days ully with their lovable one.
Error: ully Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Different Words: 148 200
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 296 350
No. of Characters: 1360 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.148 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.595 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.23 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 52 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.579 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.707 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5