In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Nowadays nobody can deny the fact being over-weighted is getting a serious problem for most people all over the world. Moreover, decreases in the levels of health and fitness make us think about this issue and take some measures immediately.
To begin with, there are several reasons which bring about over weightiness. To my mind, as one of the numerous causes, modern lifestyles of people maintain the top position of the list. To date, technological developments have eased our lives, however it has almost lacked the physical work. In other words people can do everything; send letter, pay for...
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