In some countries today young people are less respectful and polite to others. What could be the reasons behind such behavior? What can be done about it?
Every day we hear some stories about the human life in the past, how they have lived, how much they were be polite and how much they were respectful to old people. Unfortunately, nowadays we see young people are not polite as the past.
In my opinion there are several reasons for that. First of all, the last two decades the way people's lives have been changed so much. The most important reason of these changes is technology improvement. These improvements have some side effects on people behavior especially on teenagers. In the past, every society had a regular hierarchy. Old people were in the top and young people were in the middle or button. People respect to each other because it was a human behavior. However, today young people do not act at the same way. They think in the technological world, these tradition behaviors have no place and if they want be successful, they should think about themselves.
The other reason for this behavior is globalization. As we know, in the globalization there are no boundaries. We see this behavior most in the third world, because people are confused between tradition and modernity in the Third World. On the one hand, they were learned to be polite and the other hand they have try hard to gain more advantages.
There is only one way to solve this issue. In my opinion, every problem can be solved with proper training. We should start our training when our children at school or we can produce some TV programs and teach people what is the best behavior and how much is good if we are polite.
To conclusion, we cannot force people to change their behavior, we hope people listening to our voice and think about that.
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Sentence: They think in the technological world, these tradition behaviors have no place and if they want be successful, they should think about themselves.
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