Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today s society To what extent do you agree with this view

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Undoubtedly, advertisements have become backbone of varied range of national and multinational companies. Through placing ads on platforms that involved in daily routine of all age groups, those companies entice customer to spend money on their goods. But sometimes those advertisements are exaggerated in unpleasant and unmoral way which detriment society especially the juveniles. In this essay I will vindicate the fact that those distracted inappropriate advertisements overweight the ones which truly displays the reality.

Nowadays, ads play a vital role in our lives. Besides pamphlets on roads and corners, bombardment of pop-up adds on internet window allure a customer to check them out. For some instance, those commercials make sense, but sometimes, those ads use illogical and offensive ideas to get fame to their product. For example, there is an add to promote sharp edge knife. It displays fight of two criminals where ultimately the person who holds the knife of a company wins the fight after he stabbed his opponent. this product could be displayed or commercialized by using it for other positive purposes. Eventually, in the race of exaggerating the product, these commercials left dark prints of crime and offense in the mindset of observer.

Additionally, those commercials are publicized by connecting them to our personal and professional lives. In one or another way we feel deeply attached to them emotionally and mentally, predominately the adults and infants too. Bitterly, those adds promote merchandize at the cost of exhibiting worst phase of our society. For example, there is an add to promote alcohol in which a husband cruelly knocks his wife. The add is trying to show that man became powerful after they drink fatal alcohol but at the same time, it indirectly displays male dominant civilization in which a woman is nothing else than a thing of entertainment. Supposedly, this add will detriment the young generation and left glimpse of home violence in their mindset.

In conclusion, there are enormous number of facts which rectify the negative impact of bulletins. But if government implement strict rules on format of adverts, the adverse consequences of them will surely improve to a good extent. Otherwise, I strongly agree with the fact that techniques of advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society.