Now days in modern world ways used in advertising are immoral and unsatisfactory in today's society. In my view it is obvious that advertisement are been immoral and unsatisfactory in term of young generation, it sometimes create negative effect on them. This is essay will discuss the immoral and unsatisfactory advertisement with example and arguments.
Today’s world companies are using many strategies to sell their products. Using new technologies companies create many methods to attract customers. Therefore some time they are using immoral and intolerant things in advertisements. Some advertisements have sexy and violent scenes which can encourage people to bad behaviour. The result of those is to increase crime such as family violent, abused crime. Advertisement companies more attract to younger generation because they are easily influence .As a result they pressurize their parents to buy expensive things .Now children forget our culture and they are using western culture more.
Now days there are also lot of benefit’s of advertisement .Firstly people get to know much more information from advertisement about clothes, dress, everything available online and they have more options to buy things. Secondly people have choice to buy things online , advertiser provide home delivery such as Daraaz.com etc.
In my opinion government should take some steps .There should be some limit on publishing advertisement so they our young generation don’t forget our traditions. Government should make one committee to check advertisement before publishing in country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71848739496 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1641095798 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8566219617 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206621263476 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778329908041 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043941470958 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116754522196 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410961306351 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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