Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a view that a pleasant job is more important than well-paid one. However, some claim that high wage is a necessary condition for a worthy life. The first opinion is a rather romantic approach to life, as its proponents argue, reflects more comprehended understanding of reality.
Admittedly, we cannot exclude the importance of material well-being of an individual from our discussion. To some, terms of success or even happiness are stated in monetary terms. They are not to blame, of course, because this is the result of popular on our lives. A car or two in the garage, a large mansion...
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