Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary brings to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s world, our job has become one of the most relevant aspects in our life. And it is common opinion that getting the desired occupation would bring you a comfortable and pleasant life.
However, it is debated whether it is more important to have a good wage or to work in a field that fits your personality. For what it concerns the former statement, supporters claim that earning a lot of money is highly necessary in our society as far as a good salary is considered a consequence, and, of course, a cause, of success and, what it is more important, with that money you are allowed to ...
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