Some people believe that technological tools such as body scanner and CCTV have significantly enhanced our safety and security, while others feel that they have resulted In a loss of privacy.
Do the benefits of these items outweigh their disadvantages?
For the last decade, technology has widely been used for reducing th criminal activity in public places. However, there are pros and cons toward this utilization of technology. While some people against with privacy reason, I tend to believe that electronic item, such as body scanner and CCTV have more advantages than its drawbacks.
Since CCTV has been used in many public places, there has been an increase for security level. Before CCTV has emerged, there were many criminal activities in public places. The highest frequency for robbery occurred in lift. But, after CCTV put in lift, there w...
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Suggestion: Refer to this and cases
It is good idea to
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Suggestion: Refer to who and responsible
Sentence: Ultimately, it is undeniable that technology like CCTV and body scanner have such great role in enhancing the safe and secure lavel.
Error: lavel Suggestion: level
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Avg. Sentence Length: 15.263 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 290 350
No. of Characters: 1413 1500
No. of Different Words: 171 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.127 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.872 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 5.692 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.462 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.043 0.07
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