Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstance of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Criminal is person who commit crime for wrong motive. It is vital for society to punish him in order to provide deterrence, and safeguard peace, harmony among citizen. Although, some folks suggest to give same conviction for every crime, while others want factors like severity, purpose of such act should be considered before judgement. This essay will analyze both opinion.
With regard to giving equal jurisdiction, It is fair to say any harm whether big or small caused to society should not be taken lightly, so that convict abstain from re-offending. Because punishment is equal and guarantee...
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Sentence: Criminal is person who commit crime for wrong motive.
Suggestion: Criminal is person who commits crime for wrong motive.
Sentence: With regard to giving equal jurisdiction, It is fair to say any harm whether big or small caused to society should not be taken lightly, so that convict abstain from re-offending.
Description: The fragment convict abstain from is rare
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