Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviors. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural difference.
In this era, many people spend their holiday by traveling. They prefer to travel to other countries. Some people claim visitor should follow local customs and behaviors when they are in particular place but some other people believe that host country should welcome with dissimilar culture.
Some people argue that tourist should understand about local country customs in order to respect local societies. Similarly, foreigner should learn about culture of destination country because they have unfamiliar culture especially in manner of life. For instance, some tourists who visit tourism place such as Bali, and they want to see some objects they should get permission from local people in charge who keeps it.
On the other hand, other people give opinion that local community should try to figure out about new people who tour to their place. Some visitors might do not know about their customs and behaviors. Moreover, host country should guide foreigner through some information to avoid misunderstanding. For illustrate, some tourism spots usually put direction or important rules before people enter to that place and they often provide guidance service to accompany some foreigners to enjoy tourism place.
In my point of view, some tourists should realize or understand local tradition. It becomes essential for foreigner because appreciate local habits as manifestation of humanity value, and local people should grasp toward stranger people who come around their place. It is true that each place has diversity but people should think how to compromise with this condition, they do need to compare one place to others about hospitality because people might have own ways how to treat foreigners.
To conclude, some people think that some tourists should obey with local cultural rules because it is important for travelers who want to go to particular country, they might be easy to access some interesting places which have different culture. Nevertheless, host country should appreciate toward abroad visitor who come to their place because foreigner might give some benefits to increase local income from tourism aspect.
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Sentence: On the other hand, other people give opinion that local community should try to figure out about new people who tour to their place.
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