some people claims that people eat in many western countries is unhealthy and that their diet isgetting worse. critics says that these countries should change their diet.
Currently, one of the most considerable issues in the world is different health problems. It is a well-known fact that one of the this kind of problems is eating habits in all over the world especially in most western countries. Opinions are divided as to whether people eating habits are unhealthy in western societies and they should change their diet, and it is my firm conviction that mentioned countries should change their diet because of some drammaticaly considerable reasons given below.
First of all, it is a blatantly obvious that people of western countries like to eat fast foods a...
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Sentence: Opinions are divided as to whether people eating habits are unhealthy in western societies and they should change their diet, and it is my firm conviction that mentioned countries should change their diet because of some drammaticaly considerable reasons given below.
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