Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential.
How could computers be considered a hindrance?
In recent years, our life style become more better. A lot of digital devices have been invented such as computers, robots. In the past, people did everything by self. They recorded everything in especial book, used their mind to calculated. But, today all this job has been done by computers.
In fact, computers have al lot of benefits. First of all, people do their job more easier and faster than the past. Secondly, when we use computer, we remove human mistake. Human can forget, or do a mistake when he or she do calculated or record something. But computers do not do such as mistakes. Fi...
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Sentence: In recent years, our life style become more better.
Description: The fragment style become more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace 'become more better' with 'becomes much better'
First of all, people do their job more easier...
Suggestion: First of all, people do their job much easier
Sentence: They recorded everything in especial book, used their mind to calculated.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and calculated
Sentence: Finally, Space that we need for save all information are decrease.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and save
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No. of Characters: 1193 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.175 7.5
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satifactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 262 350
No. of Characters: 1193 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.023 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.553 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.406 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.175 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.682 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.455 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.134 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5