Some people say that the best thing about being rich is being able to help other people what do you think?
The gap between rich and poor are increasing day by day. Undoubtedly, rich people have extra potential to help others as they have surplus money. There only a few people are realizing this fact and helping others. In my essay, I will explain the main reasons in support of my views.
Only a few industrialists are philanthropists. They spend their money on luxuries, such as lavish parties and unwanted things. Instead, they should spend the money on educating poor children or supporting old peoples. A smile of gratitude is worth millions of dollars. For instance, when you feed the hungry and re...
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Tessy, your helps to other
Tessy, your helps to other users are greatly appreciated!
Sir... Thank you so
Sir...
Thank you so much..
So many times i thought it is allowed or not. As Ashbin is like my Brother, i didnt bother.
Thanks for clearing it.
Thanks again
Tessy
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