Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is undeniable that healthy citizens are the backbone of any society. While many people suggest that the most feasible method to improve social health status is to construct more sports centres, others reject this idea, believing that it would not bring much benefit. Presented below are several factors accounting for the stark contrast between these two perspectives.
Admittedly, investing in sports facilities projects is beneficial for certain reasons. Firstly, it possibly brings playing sports become a widespread habit. The availability of modern sports centres, without doubt, can attrac...
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Sentence: In fact, a lack of new practising devices as well as qualified coaches is the main reason why the Vietnamese alienate these places.
Error: practising Suggestion: practicing
Sentence: As a result, more people will join sports courses as the price is generally more affordble.
Error: affordble Suggestion: affordable
Sentence: The authority should accordingly introduce alterative measures.
Error: alterative Suggestion: No alternate word
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